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The most serious problem in urban cities is pollution. In my opinion, government must take action to reduce carbon emission from cars. People should used public transportations more often to protect the environment. Also, building more parks can helps city becoming more green. If we doesn't change our behavior, the planet will suffer a lot of damages in the future.
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#### Ngữ pháp

- • Lỗi thì quá khứ: "People should used" -> "People should use" (Sau modal verb dùng V-inf).
- • Chia động từ ngôi thứ 3: "parks can helps" -> "parks can help".
- • Hòa hợp chủ vị: "If we doesn't" -> "If we don't".

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#### Từ vựng

Từ vựng còn khá đơn giản. Nên thay "most serious problem" bằng "pressing issue" hoặc "pivotal challenge". Sử dụng thêm các từ chuyên ngành về môi trường như "carbon footprint" thay vì "carbon emission".

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#### Cấu trúc bài

Bài viết có cấu trúc rõ ràng nhưng thiếu các từ nối (linking words). Nên bổ sung các cụm như "Consequently", "Furthermore" hoặc "In addition to" để tăng tính gắn kết giữa các câu.

"One of the most pressing issues in modern urban areas is pollution. In my perspective, the government must take decisive actions to minimize carbon footprints. Furthermore, citizens should utilize public transportation more frequently to preserve the ecosystem. Enhancing urban greenery by developing more parks is also vital. Unless we transform our behavioral patterns, the planet will encounter irreversible environmental damage in the near future."
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